Sunday, April 23, 2006

Heh just critted a short story for my little bro (he's in year 12). What was the story like?

Actually pretty good I thought - given it's context. Lots of passive voice and a failure to give the protag a name, but the concept was largely on paper and the descriptions (if perhaps a little too much) weren't bad.

Hmmm I'd better get back to my own stuff now I guess.


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